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[sfct episode four]

the animation was smooth this time, except for the fall into the water that didn't look quite right. but these feel unfinished. started a flashback and then it was a blur of rough drawings. i liked the blinking eyes during the preloader though.

littlegoblet responds:

yeah I should have cleaned the ending up abit. yes I thought the part with him falling in the water looked abit off too but I just didn't know how to fix it. but thanx for your input buddy really appreciate it.

[sfct episode 3]

hey this is some nice looking stuff, althought very short. the waterfall noise was a bit much at first, but the dialogue was good.

littlegoblet responds:

thanx buddy. I will definitely make sure I keep the sound effects in check from now on. I appreciate your input and advice :D

[fullbody]

very short, but i smirked a bit during that backflip. some potential to this. add some more moves and some textures

ganuganu responds:

did you like that backflip, it took an hour to make.

[Hate- Depresion]

you were exploring some interesting avenues in your dialogue...putting some more detail in your characters may have helped make this more entertaining

Gheata responds:

Ok, thanks. I shall do so.

[Red 2 - Red and the Ball]

Some of your animations are pretty good...

...but you need to look up something called a moving hold. I know you are trying to add anticipation by pausing on certain frames but when there is no movement at all it gets really boring and stale. I like your little speed blurs and other motions like the red guy crawling out from underneath the heavy ball.

moony1993 responds:

thanks... I'll work on it...

[Fish Sticks]

it was kind of boring...

but the lipsyncing was decent.

Trottimus responds:

Understood, I'll bear that in mind for next time :)

[Sonic In Glitchawg]

The audio is unbearable!

There was obviously thought put into this. But it lacked many, many things...such as: better quality audio, especially with a huge file size.. what happened? Maybe some more animations or better use of the tween.

Spazkid responds:

LOL oh you

[Roundworm Invasion!]

Alright I have to review this

This was really strange because it was kind of educational although the knowledge was awkwardly placed and displayed. The audio wasn't too bad though and it looks like you put some time into it. But I recommend re-thinking some of the shots, for example: when you had the "eggs" text pointing to a circle, maybe you could try to visually show that instead? Just a thought, might make things more interesting you could still use the other shot too. I know you probably won't work on this again but hopefully you will keep doing animations.

billabo responds:

About the info being akwardly placed, yea hehe that's partly because of the bit of hurry I had at the end to get it done, especially the digestive system scene and reproducing scene. I just threw them in because I realized I didn't have them. The rest I tried to work in with the story, but I guess I didn't really plan it out very much.

Thanks for the helpful suggestions and support!

[Jetto Ninjin]

Why, hello

This was a good flash and I'm sure you all are pleased with the outcome. Ignore these egotistical critics and continue to increase your skills and experience. There were quite a bit of strange things in there, and by strange I only mean the ass-raping text and penis carrots haha, which are still pretty funny. So yeah, excellent.

Starberry responds:

hey at least you aren;t

[Crappy Movies on NG]

Yup, the sound wasn't very good.

I turned down my volume so that I couldn't hear the PHT every few seconds. Other than that, i guess it was alright.

BlackerOuT responds:

I don´t have a good microphone, but thanks!
The price of this Shit in dollars: 50 Cents