MPM's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[World's Biggest Battle 1]

Hey man not bad

Dbz inspired and stuff, I wonder how you made it because it doesn't look like you drew it in flash. The quality is very low and the music is too mellow for a fight! The text could be better too, you might as well just use a font and maybe put it on the bottom like white text on a black box. Also try to figure out pre-loaders and really wrap up the end then have a "Replay" button so people take it seriously cause some dudes chewed me out for not having those on my last one but there are plenty of tutorials online.

[Maybe It's a Virus]

hey this was cool

after watching it for about 20 seconds it started to grow on me and i thought that was a good use of simple colors and shapes. it is tough to get a 'music video' feel through animation.

[Fish Sticks]

it was kind of boring...

but the lipsyncing was decent.

Trottimus responds:

Understood, I'll bear that in mind for next time :)

[War, Snow and Fire]

I love how other people criticize this...

as if they were able to transcend the technical aspects of drawing art and using programs to create a real piece of work like this.

[blacknightthebp actions]

Does not seem finished...

could have had a big ass explosion and then put your name and called it done before it looped back to the play screen. You have ideas and that is good, so just keep on animating and you will get better. Some of the hands and faces looked a little funky... Are you using the mouse to draw the frames?? Mucho dragonball influence in there huh?

[Spoiler fights Zombies]

I gotta say

this is pretty awesome. But that walk cycle in the beginning could use some work. But i love the use of the blood splatters and the creepy sounds and music. Went together well with the animation.

[Sonic In Glitchawg]

The audio is unbearable!

There was obviously thought put into this. But it lacked many, many things...such as: better quality audio, especially with a huge file size.. what happened? Maybe some more animations or better use of the tween.

Spazkid responds:

LOL oh you

[The shapeshifter]

Decent little animation

could use some color and maybe if they "shifted shape" during walk/flying cycles, it might help out the length and interest of the animation.

[curlyneals'curlyadventure]

There may have been some effort in there...

if you want to make movies like this...this speed is too slow. Try increasing the fps. The audio(wtf?) was awful. The type was also horribly placed.

[Bringing a Knife to a Gun]

awesome

that was better than i expected...but why didnt you just do the photoshop stencil cutout trick for your other characters? for the sword and gun instead of just the bear and dolphin? pretty good though...