Nice animation
I thought you did well on your secondary motion with cloth and hair. I also liked the lines along with their expressions about the prices...it helped made things clear. It was short, but refreshingly simple. I would like to see more situations like this, maybe a bit more lengthy but not too much if you wanted to keep that shorts style. Maybe add some cool color schemes or styles as well, or leave it out, up to you.
Alright I have to review this
This was really strange because it was kind of educational although the knowledge was awkwardly placed and displayed. The audio wasn't too bad though and it looks like you put some time into it. But I recommend re-thinking some of the shots, for example: when you had the "eggs" text pointing to a circle, maybe you could try to visually show that instead? Just a thought, might make things more interesting you could still use the other shot too. I know you probably won't work on this again but hopefully you will keep doing animations.
About the info being akwardly placed, yea hehe that's partly because of the bit of hurry I had at the end to get it done, especially the digestive system scene and reproducing scene. I just threw them in because I realized I didn't have them. The rest I tried to work in with the story, but I guess I didn't really plan it out very much.
Thanks for the helpful suggestions and support!
Nice job!
I noticed how well you implemented drunken boxing moves into the animation. It was all very smooth and the text was always visible for a good amount of time, it reminded me a bit of an MMO....hmmm maybe you could make an interactive drunken stick?!
an example of great work?
i believe so, this is impressive and very interesting. the artwork was awesome, and the action looks great.
Why, hello
This was a good flash and I'm sure you all are pleased with the outcome. Ignore these egotistical critics and continue to increase your skills and experience. There were quite a bit of strange things in there, and by strange I only mean the ass-raping text and penis carrots haha, which are still pretty funny. So yeah, excellent.
hey at least you aren;t
Nice.
You made Mario look damn awesome. The animation style was incredible.
why must you do this
the first one: i was quite pleased. great job. the second one: wtf?
Alright, this movie is awesome
the BEST scene, is when Chase is off. That is so awesome. good job. this movie kicks ass.
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